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The bell has rung, the swing has swung
The cycle starts once more
Through space and time, through fall and prime
It's washed you up ashore
This point in time, this forced rhyme
This fractal map of trails
Where we will go, we do not know
We're just fighting through the gales
This insane world, oh how we've whirled
Through its unwritten story
What you will do, is up to you
To find your path to glory
So set the sails, onboard the rails!
The stars are growing tired
The bell has rung, the swing has swung
What is it you desire?
:iconmehdimentio:
This was meant as a semi-inspirational piece in honor of a good friend who turns 18 today. I think this is the first time I've attempted to write something that wasn't just spontaneously put together as some kind of a quasi-lyrical emotional outburst in text form, so it didn't come out nearly as good as the upbeat poem said friend so kindly wrote for me when I turned 17 some week ago. Either way... Here it is! Whatever it is, anyway.
Enjoy your birthday, my friend!
:iconnekonutchi:
Thank you so much! I love your witty and playful way of expression, it always manages to make me smile. :aww:
I hope you didn't feel forced to reciprocate the (relatively small) effort I put into piecing together that greeting to you recently,
as is often the case with my spontaneous ideas, it didn't turn out very well IMO.
However, I really liked your reply, my dear friend!
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:iconmehdimentio:
Not at all! It was fun writing something in a different style for once. I'm just relieved you liked it.
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